Enthralled
By Lance Porter

It actually took me some work to get a hold of this book. I originally tried to buy it from Amazon only to be told a month and a half later that they couldn't get a hold of it. After that I searched around the net and it started showing up in different places with huge price tags. One place on the web wanted $80 for it! Maybe it's out of print or something. The book itself is nothing special. It's a regular paperback and I can't in anyway see it worth more then the $7.99 I paid for it. I found it at Barnes & Noble. It took longer the the other books I ordered but that's because I think it came directly from the UK.

I'm going to keep this review short because while the book was well written the story just isn't for me. This isn't meant to be a bad review though. It's a good book just not the type of story that I like.

The main character of the story becomes infatuated with the gorgeous Jasmine. Jasmine on the other hand has no interest in him other then to berate, humiliate and torture. There are a few sex scenes scattered through out the book. Once Jasmine lets him go down on her when her stud doesn't come across. There's another notable scene where her dog is stripped naked and his cock is used by a whole room full of women for their entertainment. They pinch and torture his hard cock for their amusement. Jasmine tops them all by fucking him up the ass with the heel of her expensive fashion shoe. They all laugh as he thrusts his ass in the air and comes for them.

The majority of the book is spent on him worshipping her and Jasmine treating him like shit. Eventually she ruins his life. Jasmine tires of him and he passes through a few women until he's left to try to rebuild his life. His career life some how ruined by his begging and groveling he eventually finds a job as a car park attendant. Things slowly start to look up for him until he runs into Jasmine again.

If you've ever had dark fantasies about groveling at the feet of the uncaring ideal of female perfection this book is for you. The story focuses more on his unrequited passion for this beautiful, unobtainable woman then anything else. Jasmine has no care or concern for her dog. In fact she'd probably treat an actual dog better then she does him. Which in the end is what puts me off this story. He's an absolute slave, willing to do anything to be near her no matter how degrading or humiliating. I have had some dark fantasies in my time, I think all submissives do, but in the end I want the woman I submit to to have some feelings for me, to care about what happens to me. Jasmine has nothing but disgust for her dog. It makes the story difficult, uncomfortable and at times a bit tedious for me to read. It is well written but unless you're into that fantasy you're not going to get much from this book.